Feedback on map and screenshot of my game

Feedback on map and screenshot of my game

Hi all

I'm a flash dev that's just started making graphical games. This one is heavily pixel with a hint of non-pixel art and I just want some feedback on how it looks. I have no eye for this, so it crappy; how can I make it better? I just needs lots of criticms because I want to try to make it as good as possible.

 

Thanks!!!!


PS: I got the base map from someone that did a map tutorial on this site. So I'm recycling that :)

 

 

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