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Tuesday, December 29, 2015 - 16:31

yes this does look better for sure.

But still needs improvement. The Color looks a way  too green now. Try to find the right tone IF you want to achieve a sand like look.

Then i didnt see at first glance but a moment later i recognized that your tiles are not seamless. What i mean by that is that i can see a cut off in the tiles where they are connected. it is not going smooth but looks misplaced. You can see this on the black wave almost everytime it connects with another tile. The round waves is suddenly stopped by 1 sharp edge. You may want to avoid that. 


Other than that, the crates and ladder should be brown colored unless you want to do some artistic style which I think is not the case here :D

Give the crate a black or dark brown border. You need something to make the crate look as a single crate not 3 together as in the picture. The border will do the job for now. i cant differantiate the crates. Can you? :D

I also would go and watch some youtube about how to draw certain things, learn new techniques and so on.

For example your rock looks very simple. Watch this speedpaint video and see how the artist takes time redrawing it over and over again. Puts layers over layers sometimes erases and redraws. I mean it needs some time to get some quality in the art you do. So take your time and think how to achieve not only a simple rock but an interesting rock.

There is lots of things to say but so far i think its enough :D



Monday, December 28, 2015 - 20:40

hey nice work. i also asked here for some help, so i think i should help others too :D

First, i would never use photoshop for this kind of thing. You may want to scale it up or down later. Imagine you have a customer who wants lets say 4x larger than you did. That would be a mess in photoshop! But you also said this, so i skip.


As for the tiles, they seem to work. You have implemented different variations which is nice, but something is missing. Yes. The corner tile. The corner tile is like a normal tile but has a rounder shape on one side. You would place such tile on the end of any tile, so it doenst end sharp, but smooth. Hope was clear enough :D


The colors. Ill be honest. I didnt like it much. Unfortunately, i cant help you out here. Are you familiar with the color scheme? Try out different "color families". Its all about experimenting. At least thats how i do it untill i find the right color :D

I dunno if the top should be dirty earth, then brown is ok. If it should be sand, then you should go for more yellowish and brighter colors. Because at this stage it doesnt look much like sand for me. Maybe someone else will comment different. 

and dont forget, many artist go over and over again until they really reach the wanted quality. So keep up the work :p


Sunday, November 15, 2015 - 07:12

ahaha yes, he looks more badass now :D


The blue and red lights are for police sure. And its awesome that you mentioned it because you remembered me one principle of designing where you should reuse colors.Like on top of helmet red light then on chest somewhere needs red too. Else it looks misplaces. thanks again ;D

Friday, November 13, 2015 - 08:12

ive updated my art and look where i got with your feedbacks :D

still needs work on it though..

Tuesday, November 10, 2015 - 14:19

yes i also thought of making him black and white

thanks for your feedback ;D

Tuesday, November 10, 2015 - 10:26

some valuable 2 cents :p

the idea with circle and lights going to his fingers sounds awesome .. why i couldnt imagine that :D

i think im going to white and black color, with jetpack and different style of chest armor.

thank you for your feedback, capbros.


Saturday, October 24, 2015 - 18:28

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