I think a good tune like this one you done Snasbisch should have up to 2-3 different loops not use just switch the instrument from piano over to synth saw halfway through it and just play the same story (play the same sequence of notes repeatedly through the rest of the tune and then it abruptly ends.   But that this tune should be to up to 2-3 minutes long, and use up to 2-3 different loops to give it more interesting rythym variation and make this tune sound aot more whole and complete instead of sounding like its only half the story done without finishing it. When it comes to tunes like this, I want to hear the rest of the story.

Because its a nice rythym piece, I like the rythym.  and I loved the vocal part in the first one that you did, But I would like to see some more variation of your loops notes using the same groovy rythym... 

An after the bass plays this nice groovy rythym for a while on the one note, I would also like to see the Bass also sometimes switch up or down the scales as well and try something interesting, difference sequence every now and again to change up or down to make things interesting to tell more of the story...  I would love to see more variations made of this tune.

I liked the sudden groovy switch from Piano to the new instrument. This can actually be looped.